2009年5月22日金曜日

essay 2

My mother gave him this name.

He came to my home when I was 13 years old.

I was given “Lucky” from my friend.

“Lucky” is a child of the dog in my friend’s house.

“Lucky” is very similar to “Sion”.

He is big but thin, and he has brownish bristle.

He runs very fast, so I am very tired.

I think that he likes me and my family very much.

It is little noisy, but very lovely.

He often fights with a dog of vicinity of my house.  80

1 件のコメント:

Rick さんのコメント...

Why did you leave out the beginning and end?

Check the passive again: "from" is wrong.

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