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I have a treasure. It is my dog. His name is “Lucky”. My mother gave him this name. He came to my home when I was 13 years old. I was given “Lucky” from my friend. “Lucky” is a child of the dog in my friend's house. His mother's name is “Sion”. “Lucky” is very similar to “Sion”. He is big but he is thin, and he has brownish bristle.

I like “Lucky” very much. I take the dog for a walk every day. He runs very fast, so I am very tire. He likes walking. Then he likes eating. He doesn't have a hate food.

I think that he likes me and my family very much. Because, when we back home, he barks very happily. It is little noisy, but very lovely.

He often fights a dog of vicinity of my house. The fight is very violent. So I can not stop the fight. I do not want him to fight. Then I hope that he live long. I will cherish him. 171