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Hello. My name is Kasumi. Please call me Kasumi. I am 19 years old. I’m from Kumamoto prefecture in Japan. I like Kumamoto very much. Kumamoto is famous for Kumamoto Castle. It is a very big and magnificent castle. Please visit it if you have a chance.

My blood type is O. There is fortunetelling of blood type in Japan. According to the fortunetelling of blood type, people of type O blood are sociable and rough. But I am not social. So I can not believe fortunetelling of blood type. Is there something like this in America?

My favorite food is ice cream. I eat ice cream everyday. I also like sushi. Have you ever eaten sushi? I want to make it if you have never eaten it. I think that you will like it if you like fish.

I have many hobbies. First, I like to watch movies. I like PIRATES of the CARIBBEAN, because I like Johnny Depp. He is very cool. I also like to watch sports. I especially like to watch tennis and volleyball and baseball. I am working at a sports store. My favorite baseball player is Ichiro! You know Ichiro, don’t you? He is a good player. I respect him. There is force in what he says. Finally, I like to go driving. I got a driver’s license last summer. So I take friends for ride. I go to Aso and Amakusa and so on. There is a caldera at Mt. Aso in Aso. There are some beaches in Amakusa. I like beaches.

I want to come to be able to speak English well. So, I will study English hard. 287/5503